Valsa George 500/500 Poem by me poet yeps poet

Valsa George 500/500

Rating: 5.0


FIRSTLY ACCEPT MY CONGRATS

We all must think

when too much
we drink

this is but a natural happening
slicing
instead of kissing

I am the one
who will do
what I want to

Bad decision
No chance now to compromise
'Tis my surmise

Drunkards two
who would now listen
to them
would you

NEITHER ME NOR VALSA GEORGE POETESS YOU

EXCELLENT story has been narrated by you

thus you are now 500/500
by kindness
PH

Wednesday, July 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: alcoholism,drunk,drunkard,drunkenness,poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Drink then die by excess or senselessness confess
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 02 August 2019

Thank you Poets Poet for your congratulations! I understand that this poem of yours is a comment in response to my limerick On the Point of a Knife! Yes, drunkenness can lead to the disruption many marriages! Enjoyed your sense of humour!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 August 2019

GLAD U LIKED IT......

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