Veneration Poem by Deep Yadav

Veneration

Rating: 5.0


When this world will turn into ashes
Still our love will smoulder inside the heap of dead,
In that darker days
When air, water and light cease
The smoke of our love
Will form the life again

We will be the God of love
We will be the blessings of him,
We will be the prayers
And the fruit of it;

Greeks will portray it on stages
And make you the goddess Aphrodite
I— your lover Ares
Ovid will write on us
In the book Metamorphoses

One day
The scholars will search in ancient text
And the students shall read
Which love path we walked
Which we tread,
Yet no one will know the truth
Where we came from
Or where we lived,
Some will say in ocean
Some prove it in air
Some explore us through art
But they will never know
That only place we lived
Is in each other's heart;

So, acquiesce — my love!
On these terms of love
Acknowledge the turmoil going in your heart
And grant the solace to my pining-yearning soul,
My love is like burning Sun
Always seeking earth to give a meaning to its rays;

My love!
If you are still hesitant,
Then change thyself in flame
I'll prove my veneration
Transforming into Moth.

Wednesday, February 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 May 2019

LOVELY POEM O ROMANTIC POET BUT IT NEEDS AN EDIT INORDER TO TRANSPORT IT INTO A CLASSIC I could help if you agree I am a POET OF ROMANTIC FREESTYLE POETRY OVER MILLIONS HAVE READ ME (This is only 4 ur information as ur on the stepping stone of Love at the peak of Mount Everest) ((((poet DY NORMALLY I don't make such an offer)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

The last stanza is captivating! Loved reading it!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

It's a fabulous piece of poetry on love! Your wonderful poetic imagination is fascinating! Wonderful power of creativity! Your style of penning is commendable! Keep it up! I vote this poem with a 10

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