Venom Poem by Javier Falcon

Venom



You speak words which kill,
those which should not be heard,
'I am leaving and might not return, '
words which are venomous.

As my veins seem poisoned,
I lay back and wait for the end,
everything seeming to fade away,
and others begin to appear.

I see times which passed by long ago,
hallucinations of when we were in love,
as we cuddled and kissed in the alley,
as I snap out of it and see total darkness.

Then soon after the pain seeps in,
crushing all which is inside me,
as I unleash a weep and begin to cry,
trying to hold hope as life slips by.

As this keeps circulating my body,
consuming all which is in me,
it makes easy disposal of me completely,
letting my body become a chasm.

As you, my only choice of survival leaves,
my chances of living perish away with my hopes,
you, being the only one able to take away this venom,
as you turn your back on me, leaving me here to die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
May Namoc 24 July 2008

i jope this is not for me either! ! i would never turn my back on u! ! te amo! anywayz, its strong. rly strong and wow. just wow. well, remember. i'm only across the world for like a couple weeks so i'll be back soon enough! and we talk anywayz so no worries right? love you mucho! <3333

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C T Heart 24 July 2008

Oh! ! ! ! ! I could sense hurt and pain in you...what happened to you and May? Hope this is not for her.....it would tear my heart apart.

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OUCHHHHHHHH! ! Hmm. what would you do if i didnt read or comment your poems, i wonder: O This is...like BURNN! ! very strong and taps into how hurt someone leaving could be. The title goes PERFECTLY with this poem, and the title is screaming read me! .<333. ...mills...

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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