Very Different Poem by GodBody O.G

Very Different

Rating: 4.5


what makes me different than the rest?
simply i've been through the fire
how do i know i'm the best?
cause u can never call me a liar
O.G. has done alot of wrongs
and today i'm trying to right them
you can see it in my poems and songs
whether you hate or like them
my goals have changed i want what's best
no more running around the streets at night
more than just money more than just sex
i want a new reason to live and fight
your heart beat is the melody to my poetry
i c my dreams on the reflection of your eyes
i'll make your laughter a priority
plainly and simply i'm nothing like other guys

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 16 April 2008

I gave this poem a nine because you obviously worked on it a lot. You did a wonderful job. I'm a very hard grader of poems, but I do appreciate effort when I see it. I particularly like rhyme. I don't even grade poems who don't have it.The important thing here is the number of votes that are cast on your poems. Not the number anyway. The poem was wonderful. Others try saying the same thing but you succeeded. Congratulations! GW62

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