Vidai (A Valediction) Poem by Azitej Anand

Vidai (A Valediction)

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Golden execution around my neck
11 steps to sold
and to mold!
Customs tradition enforces me to bold
Weeping tears as a pearl kisses my Soul..
First step out of my house
Shatter my heart durable bond
Foster me with my infancy world..
Cradle, immaturity that never belongs to me
Shivering Second step suffuses Parents vows
Breach that words
' My ward we love you
Never let you to go'
Second step strangle tradition fake face
I broke it...
I broke it..........
Golden execution around my neck
11 steps to sold
and to mold!
Third farewell bid to my own
Goodbye to my dreams, my room
that was never to be mine
My doll
and to my role.....
Moaning VIDAI song
A valediction Sound........
Tear soothes air by fourth step
Let me to break my own words...
' I should base to you Mom and Dad
Lend you all my love
Never let you despair
Always with you as a pair'
Compulsive peeping eye
Heart that loose beat by my absence
Omission of sound, 'Brother, Brother'
I broke my Fifth feather......
Golden execution around my neck
11 steps to sold
and to mold!
Sixth step precede Fifth one
Fragrance of my land
Going to be a ward of a 'Foreign land'....
Wreath of seventh tranquil layer
Embracing loving moment as a prayer...
Eighth step a facing facet
Shadow of my Family
Shadow of Culture
I have to prove there
As a penumbra care...
Weird step Ninth one
Far away from my close one...
Unknown Land
desolate sand............
Humble and Unexplained I
Want to fly....
Golden execution around my neck
11 steps to sold
and to mold!
'Dutiful', endowed to my head
Death of one soul
and the revival of my role....
Piercing my Eleventh step
Must say or not to say this mishap
Eleventh step
My last step
'I moan a lot'
Who says?
Who says?
' Only one phase of death for mortals
......to adapt heaven or hell for damsel'...
VIDAI....
VIDAI..............
' A death of a soul
..... and revival of damsel renovated role! '.........
Golden execution around my neck
11 steps to sold
and to mold!

Vidai (A Valediction)
Monday, February 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'VIDAI', a valediction ceremony in euphoric sense is satirized by the poem and force to add a cacophonous Indian taste to the reader. The poem with its antithesis view represent real and natural figure of 'Vidai scene', and the death of daughter and the birth of bride. Excellent allegoric bond between daughter and bride is shown by this Indian flavor poem.
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