Sunday, April 27, 2014

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Saw a pretty girl
in an office today
Her eyes were on fire
not sure what to say
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Lawerence Mize, Sr.
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Smoky Hoss 22 August 2020

Poignant poem; you obviously have a compassionate heart, and your words, so moving, have made me feel that compassion. Thank you for that; it is what humanity needs more of. Superb.

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Colleen Courtney 27 April 2014

Aww..this is a sad situation. But you penned a great poem out of it! Nicely done!

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Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Lawerence Mize, Sr.

Baltimore, Maryland
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