Duane Lloyd

Rookie - 146 Points (18/09/86 / Pontefract, West Yorkshire, England)

Vision - Poem by Duane Lloyd

I saw that right?
Id seen with my own sight!
Me did peep, it gave me a fright!
One watched, as eye went white!
Eye balled all night!
Watched but I'm not bright!
Winked then blinked!
Try to use mind vision to choose what's right!
Another sense not using lenses!
Me the spector!
Pay per view!
As I thought I wanna burst!
I saw me thinking that I would peep as eye Balls'ed it up I'd seen mind vision blinked an winked an watched ahead what a sight!
IMAX style hi-definition!
Stared whilst I watched, me myself ones own foot just step in life!

Topic(s) of this poem: insight, senses


Comments about Vision by Duane Lloyd

  • Kelly Kurt (11/14/2015 10:33:00 AM)


    Many kinds of vision. Thanks for sharing, Duane (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/14/2015 3:43:00 AM)


    Using mind's vision in right direction speaks about insight wonderfully. Interesting and amazing sharing....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015



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