Vision Poem by Duane Lloyd

Duane Lloyd

Duane Lloyd

Pontefract, West Yorkshire, England

Vision

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I saw that right?
Id seen with my own sight!
Me did peep, it gave me a fright!
One watched, as eye went white!
Eye balled all night!
Watched but I'm not bright!
Winked then blinked!
Try to use mind vision to choose what's right!
Another sense not using lenses!
Me the spector!
Pay per view!
As I thought I wanna burst!
I saw me thinking that I would peep as eye Balls'ed it up I'd seen mind vision blinked an winked an watched ahead what a sight!
IMAX style hi-definition!
Stared whilst I watched, me myself ones own foot just step in life!

Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: insight,senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

Many kinds of vision. Thanks for sharing, Duane

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Using mind's vision in right direction speaks about insight wonderfully. Interesting and amazing sharing....10

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