Srijeeta Manna

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Vision - Poem by Srijeeta Manna

Life under a trigger,
impatient to leave,
craving for love.
I close my eyes
and the flashback starts.....

Light from the window
kept me awake till the eternity.
A touch to make me feel free.
Desire running through,
carrying me over to the new world
where i hope to meet you on the half way.

I am not lost in the darkness of light;
but i am lost in u.

Free me from this bondage and let me go
my life is under a trigger
impatient to leave,
craving for love
from you.

Comments about Vision by Srijeeta Manna

  • Nasarudheen ParameswaranNasarudheen Parameswaran (12/26/2012 11:31:00 AM)

    A fine poem of intimacy (Report)Reply

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  • Aloke MukherjeeAloke Mukherjee (12/19/2012 5:54:00 AM)

    A good poem. One can feel the passion. (Report)Reply

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  • Utsav PatelUtsav Patel (12/8/2012 3:32:00 AM)

    Nicely written dear... I just love it... (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (12/8/2012 3:23:00 AM)

    good poem. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 8, 2012

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