Srijeeta Manna

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Untitled May Be - Poem by Srijeeta Manna

Sultry afternoon thoughts
give me some pleasure today.
Counting the leaves of the mysterious tree,
immortality fencing up my garden,
greenery of the wordly peace also fades away.

I listened to the footsteps quietly,
I felt you coming towards me.
Half asleep I listened may be
and half dead when i met u.

Love is a phoenix perhaps,
feathered with eternity.
You rise, you fall,
you injure me with your thoughts.
My wounds remain and remain;
even time cannot heal them
because only love grows with time
while hatred dies.


Comments about Untitled May Be by Srijeeta Manna

  • Sahil SoodSahil Sood (11/17/2012 8:44:00 AM)

    a beautiful write.. I luvd reading the poem.. Great work.. (Report)Reply

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  • Prasanna Kumari (11/8/2012 11:48:00 AM)

    however much we write on love, still there will be more to write....good poem (Report)Reply

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  • David GerardinoDavid Gerardino (11/6/2012 2:17:00 PM)

    better, , , , , you need to write with more feeling, , dig deep. (Report)Reply

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  • Indranil BhaduriIndranil Bhaduri (11/6/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    Mindblowing expression penned in superb fashion. Loved this. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 6, 2012



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