Tuesday, June 18, 2013

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Rating: 5.0

For love I look
Unto the ink-blue night sky
Adorned with a crescent moon.
His sublime rays penetrate
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Rakhi Nair
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Rakhi N. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Vipins Puthooran 18 June 2013

Wow...an excellent poem..... Nice vocab! ! ! !

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Babatunde Aremu 18 June 2013

Nice poem. I like the theme and use of words such as Time andspace a forgotten reality Keep writing

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