the other two poems i think have too many commas. this one may beg punctuation! it could be read in two ways, depending on the capitalization and punctuation, which you do NOT supply. sometimes this lack works ok,
but not for this poem, UNLESS you are wanting to give the reader the chance to read it the way they wish to.
glad to see you
give me a chance
to praise you
this could be: Glad to see you.
Give me a chance
to praise you.
OR: Glad to see you
give me the chance
to praise you. SEE THE DIFFERENCE? thanks for sharing, bri
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the other two poems i think have too many commas. this one may beg punctuation! it could be read in two ways, depending on the capitalization and punctuation, which you do NOT supply. sometimes this lack works ok, but not for this poem, UNLESS you are wanting to give the reader the chance to read it the way they wish to. glad to see you give me a chance to praise you this could be: Glad to see you. Give me a chance to praise you. OR: Glad to see you give me the chance to praise you. SEE THE DIFFERENCE? thanks for sharing, bri