Vision Poem by Ankit Neil Sharma

Vision



glad to see you
give me a chance
to praise you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 09 July 2013

the other two poems i think have too many commas. this one may beg punctuation! it could be read in two ways, depending on the capitalization and punctuation, which you do NOT supply. sometimes this lack works ok, but not for this poem, UNLESS you are wanting to give the reader the chance to read it the way they wish to. glad to see you give me a chance to praise you this could be: Glad to see you. Give me a chance to praise you. OR: Glad to see you give me the chance to praise you. SEE THE DIFFERENCE? thanks for sharing, bri

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Gajanan Mishra 09 July 2013

give me a chance to praise you, fine. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Jenie Franksay 09 July 2013

hmmm...haiku i guess. keep it up.

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