Mandi June

Rookie - 157 Points (10-17-81 / Fort Worth, Texas)

Visions At Twilight - Poem by Mandi June

Why must show, the twilight so,
the prophecies of ebb and flow
to give a light one cannot see
and highlight insecurity?
For in these visions, what is shown
is based on thoughts already known.
And truly, those celestial scenes
will represent one's hidden dreams.
The weakest features brought upon
and then enforced by setting sun,
are shown and heard by nature grand,
afflicting minds and able hands.
In situations, bright and bleak
in coming days, approaching weeks,
drawn by sky in colored rune
the sun reveals a humbled moon.
Then, left with these prophetic frames
the dreamer ventures off again
to, then, interpret what was seen
where fiery red meets jaded green.

Comments about Visions At Twilight by Mandi June

  • Connor Whyte (1/1/2013 9:15:00 PM)

    The use of imagery you use in your poems is something of a painting has so much use of nature and its a beautiful way to show your skills in writing,
    I enjoyed this 10+
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  • (7/29/2012 7:13:00 PM)

    Mandi, I several of your poems and enjoyed them much. You and I both write in the classic style with set rhyme and rhythm. I telly enjoy working through the effort it takes to find the words it takes to tell the story while coforming to the style. I also think that when you are finished that it is such a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work. Dick Lackman (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (7/17/2012 2:58:00 PM)

    Hey Mandi: Liked that line 'The sun reveals a humbled Moon'. Read mine - Wide Open Spaces -
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  • (7/15/2012 12:59:00 AM)

    The sun reveals a humbled moon shown and heard by nature grand,
    afflicting minds and able hands.Spinned words well depicts differaciating nature and its powers and showers.Please skim my recent posts and pen your visinory thoughts...sisirachandra vaduge srilanka.
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  • (7/12/2012 9:10:00 AM)

    This poem is wonderful! Very nicley rhymed and also seems to have a deep meaning woven in the words. Thank you for commenting on my poem, I appreciate it 100%. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/10/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    Excellently penned, love your talent for rhyme. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 6, 2012

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