Mandi June

Rookie - 133 Points (10-17-81 / Fort Worth, Texas)

Embrace - Poem by Mandi June

Forever in my thoughts,
and always with your grace,
there lies the clearest image
of this; our love's embrace.

The stare with such intensity;
your eyes, the frames compose
to bring upon devotion
that no other can impose.

The magnitude of passion,
that few will ever know,
that's shared between connecting souls
mere words could not bestow.

So, in this lifetime, fortune falls
on only those who will
allow their hearts to recognize
and in them, love fulfill.


Comments about Embrace by Mandi June

  • Rajendran Muthiah (6/7/2017 8:17:00 PM)


    Fortune falls on those who recognise love. Excellent! (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Reed (7/4/2014 1:57:00 AM)


    ...thats shared between connecting souls... great lines (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (10/3/2013 3:53:00 PM)


    nice flow, lovely well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/16/2013 5:22:00 AM)


    A wonderful poem! Love's embrace is the 'clearest image'.
    So, in this lifetime, fortune falls
    on only those who will
    allow their hearts to recognize
    and in them, love fulfill.
    Beautifully said.
    (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2012 5:06:00 PM)


    Very beautifully written. To embrace is to give all and that is all we can ever really do (Report) Reply

  • Darren David Weaver (7/7/2012 1:11:00 PM)


    I like this poem - one must embrace love to be loved. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/6/2012 9:11:00 AM)


    Lovely poem, flows beautifully and well rhymed. (Report) Reply

  • (7/5/2012 2:10:00 AM)


    lovely poem, nice poem to read, well presented poetically (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/4/2012 10:01:00 PM)


    Crisp, tight linage makes for a fluxive, mellifluous read...Like the rhyme scheme...Solid all around craftsmanship...~FjR~ (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed (7/4/2012 9:51:00 PM)


    that was the greatest poem i have read in a very long time. you write with heart. keep writing you are very good at it (Report) Reply

  • (7/4/2012 9:49:00 PM)


    I really liked the flow of this poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 4, 2012



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