Absorbing You Poem by Mandi June

Absorbing You

Rating: 3.9

Fading gently into rest I listen to your words.
The deep contractions of your chest leave not a breath misheard.
Relaxing fully to the sound I feel a sigh release;
Enraptured by the bliss I've found that brings my soul to peace.
Then whisper, softly 'I love you', alas, my heart is swept;
'Always, darling, pure and true my promise shall be kept.'
And, with these words you sense from me a silent, soothing grin
Yours returns, my heart can see; so, close my eyes again.


well written. Try reading my love poems.

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Katy Lue 30 June 2012

This is very real and sends wonderful shivers down my spine. Nice work!

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Valerie Dohren 25 April 2012

A beautiful poem, very well written.

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Romeo Della Valle 15 April 2012

Wow! Mandi! What a reservoir of strong words and rich imagery embedded in this well crafted write! Amazing! Feelings well spelled and talent and beauty filtered through this thought provoking write! WELCOME to the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Mandi June

Mandi June

Fort Worth, Texas
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