Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 481,737 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Visit True Scene - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Do you want to visit true scene?
Do you want purity to be seen?
Come with me I shall take you
To the place where you will find and fall through

Not that it is mere show
Wind here gently blows
Trees and birds happily grow
Life is normal but slowly flow

Way of life is complete different
It is seen and very much apparent
Free from any quarrel and hatred
Simple way, if at all, that is to be lead

Such is life in village
You may want it to spend with entire age
Very simple men and women
Truly waded and can be called human

Find love and affection
It may speak purely of action
What a way to feel their pulses?
All purity and nothing available for misses

I would want God to visit and stay
He would never want to go away
Such is magic in human behavior here
Animals free here and birds at liberty there

Morning is very pleasant
Prayers on walk by men folk is really pleasant
What a way to feel and breathe the air?
When His songs are sung to look divine and pure

Let that heritage be maintained
Any danger to it must be sustained
Let us free our selves from the ugly scene
Only love should rule and must be seen

Life is very short and is of great importance
It is by His special wish and we are here by chance
Let us not aggravate by adding hatred to it
Love to rule supreme and wish everyone to greet


Comments about Visit True Scene by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2012 10:32:00 AM)


    I Agree...Beautiful


    ccsocadet00103 minutes ago
    very well written
    Comment 0
    Beautiful
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2012 10:32:00 AM)


    Danielle Mobley6 minutes ago
    nicely done
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2012 8:00:00 AM)


    Do you want to visit true scene?
    Do you want purity to be seen?
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 25, 2012



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