Monday, August 27, 2018

Vocational. Comments

Rating: 4.8

When I left school
I wanted to be
A red Indian
But I didn't know HOW
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Tom Allport
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Bri Edwards 10 September 2018

i copied and pasted it to an email to myself in my Yahoo account, i did it in just under 2 minutes, but then at 2 min.1 second my Yahoo account faded out.........forever! Who knew? i enjoyed the humour/humor [humor is funny no matter how it is spelled; or not funny! ]. if this were broken into 'stanzas' i would more readily call it a poem. 'we' may be stretching 'poetic license' a bit to allow this on PH! ! ! but, heck, it IS funny & understandable! to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Practicing Poetess 27 August 2018

Hilarious! Loved it! But- - - Uh, oh! I don't think the spy job will last either, after you just blurted it out over the world wide web! A 10 for this one, and saving it to my poems list! :)

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