I hear voices from my beloved ones
And the voices tells me how much they miss me
But guess what I miss them also here at home
And to be honest with you I have to live my life now
Without worrying about my beloved ones
Becaause they are fine where they are in heaven here at home
And I should never forget that someday I will be reunited with my loved Ones in heaven here at home
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the proposed idea is simply conveyed and my sentiment that you could have brought in more imagism or at least reduced the amount of words in your poem but i still like your theme