Vows Poem by elysabeth faslund

Vows

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I will see you in Nepal, perhaps.
Singapore, Cairo, Katmandu.

But never again you,
Amongst the chickens
In the backyard
Shadows.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 04 August 2007

This is so sad. Like a scrap of an old photograph. Your economy with words is superb, as is your capacity to share without quite telling. Love, Allie xxxx

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Walt Martin 20 June 2007

I felt the 'psychogenic-lump-in-the-throat' with those few words so connected. I can be fairly analytical, but I've no idea as to reason... like a guitar note with eternal sustain. To evoke such response requires a gift somewhere beyond the concrete. Thank you!

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elysabeth faslund

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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