Thursday, March 15, 2007

Waiting Comments

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Trees on my street,
Branches covered white,

Your hunger is waiting for its muse..
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Aron Blesch
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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 March 2007

A good welcome song to the naked white snow

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Marci Made 21 March 2007

This is really nice, I like your use of words........branches where I am are also covered in white and the ground as well..........Your poem warms it up a bit..mm. :)

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Charles M Moore 21 March 2007

Perceptive and lyrical, Nice write.

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