Waiting Poem by Heather Noll

Waiting

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My heart is waiting,
waiting for you to come to me,
my eyes will not know you,
nor will my mind
but my heart will scream your name.

After we have met
you will say your name
but i will not hear it
i will only be dazed at your beauty

When you turn to leave
my heart sinks
i want to stop you from leaving
and beg you to stay
but my hand doesnt budge

I count the steps that you took
as you walk away
once you are gone
i feel empty inside
like a part of me has gone with you

When I lie in my big empty bed
I think of you constantly
then i cry, because you are not here
and the sad part is....
i dont even know your name...: (

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I've been through this last year when i met my boyfriend...it was terrible.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 November 2012

This poem sound like a song, if you keen on music writing, it would be nice to change some part to be some bridges and chorus part...it was a good writing Heather_Soul

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Heather Noll 01 November 2012

Same with me....i went through pain....but now he is mine..hows yours?

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