Waiting Poem by N Zoom

'Years passes by'? I'd use 'Years pass by'. : ) By 'hair's', do you mean 'hair has'? If so, ok, though it sounds a little strange to me. 'no known'? I'd say 'not known'. Careful. Proofread more if you 'need' to.

(cont.) 'British writers in particular are wont to use round in place of around. This substitution does occur in American English, but much less often.'

'But even though round works as a breezier alternative to around, round tends to create a casual tone, so around is usually safer in serious or formal writing.' (cont.)

Congratulations on POD, dear poet. "Running…till last breath, treasures not found"…. It is hard life, and it is the truth of life, unless one understands that LIFE IS THE TREASURE ONE IS SEEKING. Nice one, dear poet

....(cont.) ....'Treaure is not known.' What's your hurry? ? Maybe you shouldn't set your goal(s) so high. ;))) bri

'Treasures not found.'? I wonder if you want 'Treasure's not found' aka

PH may have sent an incomplete comment I had not wanted sent. Rats! 'A marathon is 26.2 miles or 42 kilometers, and it has been standard since 1908.' So, THAT 'how far' IS KNOWN. ;)

In a marathon [[ in a race it would be measured as