Sunday, December 11, 2016

Waiting For The Knight Comments

Rating: 4.3

There was a brown butterfly
Who got fascinated by the lamp's light
Her yellow light got him mesmerized
He flew back and forth to test her warmth
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JhennyRose Montecillo
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Jazib Kamalvi 11 April 2017

A good start of waiting. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2017

It's a proof that at the end of the tunnel, there's always a light. At that very moment, the bug is the lamp's brave knight. at the end the poem ends with the sense of hope. storly relating was very good. i was reading it with keen attention. like your poem very much dear poetess.

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thank you sir for appreciating my poem.

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Kim Barney 11 December 2016

Fantastic tale! You have a wonderful imagination. This is your first poem posted on this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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