Wednesday, November 11, 2020

Waiting In The Long Loneliness Comments

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Waiting in the long loneliness
Of the too long lonely day
For my wife to return
Alone with the rain outside
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Shalom Freedman
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Khairul Ahsan 19 November 2020

'But the rain outside, the green leaves of the trees And my inner loneliness and sorrow.' - All I can say is cheer yourself up, thinking and writing about the beauties of life you have witnessed, and of God.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2020

Through meeting of conversation the loneliness and emptiness and silence return. An amazing seasonal poem is very brilliantly penned.

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