Waiting On You Poem by james d nall,jr

Waiting On You

Rating: 5.0


When you get this message, don't even call
I'll be at the lake, admiring the colors of Fall
Sitting on an old hollowed out log
Maybe throwing a stick for my old dog

I'll sit there till twilight or first dew
Patiently waiting.....waiting for you
A little smile, the only jewelry I'll wear
While thinking of you, your skin so fair

The day will pass, like all the others do
While I wait....waiting on you
Knowing in my heart, that you won't come
It doesn't make me stupid, just a little numb

I buried you, ten years ago, today
When to God I cried, as I prayed
Take me, Oh Lord, Let her live
But that one request, He didn't give

So, the years pass slowly as I sit here
Wondering how life, could take someone so dear
Was it even real? or just my imagination?
Thats left me, in this situation?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Excellent and heart touching too! I love this well penned and rich in great imagery and rhymes! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Waiting with a smile like a jewelry I'll wear! That was a wonderful line..I like this poem very much.. Excellent write!

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blackshear, georgia
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