MarcDaniel Paul


Wake Up! ! ! ! - Poem by MarcDaniel Paul

In the dark shadows of your soul,
I delved for the flames of truth
For so long,
I tried to feed your mind,
But your effortless failures only led me to dilemmas
Is my patience eternal?
Isn’t my flesh from humanity? ?
My constant undesired results,
Have now become boring
And in the obscure I still wonder
Will your spirit ever cross that bridge! ?
That bridge of darkness;
That has paralyzed your being?
Will your spirit ever break that chain of blindness! ?
Someday! ?
My hope is still deeper than the sea….
But my expectations,
Have not even yet put on pants
Wake up! ! ! ! !
And gaze into the vision of light!
For your brawn,
Have not described your true strength
You hold the vigor of a tiger
A love that comes from above
A spirit that is immortal
A gift, not yet unwrapped
But wake up!
For I know it’s the only way,
To make your dream come true
Wake up!


Comments about Wake Up! ! ! ! by MarcDaniel Paul

  • (12/6/2009 5:42:00 AM)


    Well expressed...good job (Report) Reply

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  • (12/5/2009 5:22:00 PM)


    good poem :) love it, write more :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2009 7:01:00 PM)


    sweetness i loved it (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2009 6:56:00 PM)


    expectations have not even put on pants,
    cute, and funny
    this poem shows you have a lot of potential as a poet.
    Keep it up
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2009 4:36:00 PM)


    this is realy good! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 13, 2011


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