Waking Poem by Tom Billsborough

Waking

Rating: 2.8


In the hot light of day
There is no reality
Only in our dreams.

Thursday, April 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first attempt at a haiku!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Joseph 21 April 2016

I agree with the sentiment. The first line had 6 syllables tho. Otherwise the form and content were perfect

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Tom Billsborough 21 April 2016

Whoops! I'll put my L plates back on! Thanks for pointing that out, Michael. Nice to hear from you. Tom Billsborough

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Preston Lancashire England
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