This is a lovely composition
except that the flute player
is barely distinguishable
to en passant viewer and with
at that great effort which makes
the stick-like details incongruous
within the overall scene. Well,
in my opinion anyway, right?
Of course to the creator
it's as obvious as sand in the eye
that's if god has at least one and if
an ocean had nothing but sand.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem