Wall Comments

Now a more serious poem indeed...Pent up emotions there...don't want to tell it as it is..not so soon, at least...All walled up feelings. Us, humans. Good write. Cheers. Subroto

she made it lovely, like a minaret... Tanning the anger inside Draining true joy of the mind and face

somehow this poem reminds me one of Frost's poem...'Mending wall' here I find the wall more concrete...but watering may find a crack and timely it will melt...the metaphor is well placed..liked reading it.