Saturday, January 30, 2010

Wanderer Above The Sea Of Fog Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am full of words. It seems a battle rages here,
Where the music of my dreams somehow accompanies my fear;
As a tumult and a rage, and a terrible display
Of violence, the stage is set to crumble and decay.
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Robert Perry
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I'm me 30 January 2010

Wow this is genuinely a good poem! 'Why? ' you may ask, well I don't have a real answer. But I recognize a good poem when I see one haha. I can say this though: the poem flows along really nicely when read out loud, except for the last line in my opinion. Well, perhaps that's intentional. I vote 10/10! -Cheng Zheng

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