Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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War Is Destructive

Rating: 5.0

War is destructive

It is destructive tactic to start
Battle lines are drawn with little spark
No one thinks of its miserable part
It is needs courage to show humanitarian act

Young and old all in same think race
Long aspiration and worry on the face
What country would get in return?

If it goes to war at any time in turn
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welcome michael n ganesh a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Ganesh Maharaj likes this. Ganesh Maharaj Beautiful and thought provoking, truth is being exposed.14 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 Vineetkumar Thakur likes this.

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Shahpur Kalan likes this. Seen by 8 ke · 1 Hasmukh Mehta welcome du kriplani n rajendra a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Stephen Adinoyi well done. ur message is meaningful. but ur attemt to make every line to ryme has lessened d 'poeticness' of dis poem. forcin some rymes makes d poem wordy and some lines clumsy. to a look again, avoid forcin rymes. it is not all gud poems that must rymes 8 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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2 people like this. Nick Clark The above picture isn't war. It's precision defence against the war like. 8 hours ago · Like Nick Clark They're totally cool. They're wielding Barrett M-109's. You meet one of these pro's while out walking, you ask him his life story... Remember whatever he says... Tremendous. Absolutely tremendous. 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark Actually... I think only one is a Barrett M-109... the other is a slightly different muzzle. Can't recognise. 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark But don't worry. These chaps. They're holding it down. Fly whisper to Echo Three... (World is saved now, bruv) .....See More 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark (Later model Lee Enfield I think) . 8 hours ago · Like Nick Clark Do snipers start wars? Or finish them? 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark BAM! 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Hasmukh Mehta aoo depends on prepardness a few seconds ago · Like Hasmukh Mehta welcome jaya n lavin a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Bede 'Didi' Okoro likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Sir, a lovely didactic poem in great rhyme and rhythm is so very appealing! I wish all read this marvellous poem and benefit by it! Thanks for sharing, Sir! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jul 04,2013

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Ramesh Rai beautiful write 21 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Jane Lynahan Karklin Seen by 11 Jane Lynahan Karklin and Ramesh Rai like this. RaFine write. 50 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Jane Lynahan Karklin Fine write. 32 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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