War Master Poem by Devin Weseen

War Master

Rating: 4.5


Does killing make you satisfied?
War Master
Does killing make you happy?
War Master
If one dies why do you have to make more die?
War Master
Why do you not answer me?
War Master

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Ching 23 December 2008

the last question in your poem creates a great affect of doubt and distrust...it catches the reader at the very end...great work, overall Leslie

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Devin Weseen

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Flin Flon, manitoba
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