Wednesday, May 21, 2008

Warmly Wrapped In Your Words Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thank you for the note last night,
I went to bed warmly wrapped in your words,
suffused in a rosy glow of all that you promised,
warmly wrapped in the love you sent me,
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Louise Tredoux
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Susan Williams 25 October 2014

Love a mystery! On the surface, the story in this poem hasn't one ripple and stays serenely looking back at us... The speaker, however, could be so many different people in very different roles- it makes me wonder, makes me think, could she be saying one thing and laughing at us under her breath. I will read more by Louise Tredoux and maybe that will give me a clue.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 May 2008

Words have very dynamic powers

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Fahim Sayed 21 May 2008

Nice lines...Louise..............

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Coach Roth 21 May 2008

Beautiful, charming...elegant imagery...and a nice thought as well...good write...Coach

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