Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

Warmth Of Your Betrayal - Poem by Vishal Sharma

i was running over the blade edge
just to make a perfect cut
just to spill out all my blood
blood that joined you from blood that joined you from me
i was certain i may rest in peace after this
your love was the evil gust of winds
my soul was so deep that it snatched from it.

Topic(s) of this poem: pain

Form: Acrostic

Comments about Warmth Of Your Betrayal by Vishal Sharma

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/4/2015 1:37:00 AM)

    Warmth Of Your Betrayal - the title is very attractive with brilliant use of irony. nice write. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/3/2015 10:52:00 PM)

    Running over razor's edge is prompted by great restlessness of mind of an individual and in such a state a perfect cut may not be possible. Off course, it can be an outcome of a betrayal of very high magnitude.
    Nice write. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 5, 2015

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