Was She In Love Poem by Barry Middleton

Was She In Love



was she in love, I do not know
she lost her way so long ago
the night was cold in late September

she traveled far, where spirits stray
consumed by ghosts she could not slay
her soul was just a dying ember

still I recall a better day
when she would weep and she would pray
she is the one I will remember

was she in love, I'll never know
I call to her where wishes grow
in dreams that bring a sweet surrender

Was She In Love
Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 29 February 2016

Her soul was lost A dying ember...love is a strange feeling. Lost love is never forgotten. It makes us nostalgic n sad. But at the same time its remembrance gives us a kind of joy. This poem evokes emotions n memories. Well penned.

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Barry Middleton 29 February 2016

Thank you. Glad you liked it. One of my goals is always to make the reader feel what I feel. I am happy to have a reader who understands what I am projecting.

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