Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Wasted Comments

Rating: 4.0

to him you talked
you left me to hang
foolish and mocked
the warning bells rang
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Mike Sheriff
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 June 2008

Technically, there is nothing wrong wuth this poem. So it is an 8 under any assessment a poet can make. I simply can't go higher though. That's because there is nothing extraordinary that would make it a 10 and it is rather simple from a rhyming standpoint, which makes it weak enough to make it less than a 9. GW62

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