Thomas Bo Lee Daves II

Rookie (September 21,1987 / Jasper, Indiana)

Wasted - Poem by Thomas Bo Lee Daves II

I'm like the darkness
I have no soul
I'm like a heart
With a big hole
I'm like a demon
I have a knife
I'm like the Reaper
I'll take your life
I have no meaning
I have no cause
I'll destroy your mind
I'll give you flaws
I'm very evil
I'm very confusive
I'll make you angry
I'll make you abusive
You'll find yourself
Or maybe you won't
You might like it
But your kids sure don't
You'll make enemies
You'll fight at night
You'll make friends
You'll think you're alright
But truth be told
You're a loser
You have nothing to live for
You're a f*cking boozer


Comments about Wasted by Thomas Bo Lee Daves II

  • (3/15/2009 12:22:00 AM)

    This is a real zinger, It is a message that should be put on the back of all booze bottles like they warn you on the effects of Cigarettes smoking. A very good write indeed 10+++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 14, 2009



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