Watch And Learn Poem by Aiman Rathore

Watch And Learn

Rating: 3.7


Seek, seek, search!
untill you find it
if you can't,
then start over
It's your time,
to watch and learn
from those,
who have begun

It's not a matter
of pride, ego
or degree
It's a question
of life, breaths and
the love for misery

so look deeper
or start again
listen to the voice
without a shame
It's your choice
If you want no pain.

18-aug-08.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 18 December 2008

a true to write verses..great concept.. Keep up the good job..keep on writing.. Ency Bearis

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Sameer Ahmed 18 December 2008

It illuminates a creative and inspirational approach for those who watch through blind eyes, never search properly and never learn due to self-ignorance. They should learn from this and apply pragmatism in their lives considering the message conveyed in this poem. Best Wishes!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 December 2008

Watch, Learn and Search these three words are the keys to success. So; Keep on watching Keep on learning Keep on searching And then keep on writing What you secrete from your brain. My utmost wishes are with you..........Naseer

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Paul Hansford 16 December 2008

This is very true, and it's true of writing poetry too. Search until you find it, watch and learn. A promising start to your poetry.

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