Watching Our Face

Like a great artist, u stand afar and watch your creation, shining in pure smile. you live in the heart of the Transcendent..........i love this line and from there you jump to catch a rainbow........... wonderful imagination in such a small poem............ thank you

Like an artist after the creation of an original work, you stand afar and look at ur creation that shines in a beautiful smile........ great imaginary power. you live in the heart of the transcendent............. i loved this line......... heart of the transcendent............. it is mystical. thank you for sharing such a small poem with so much of worth.

jumping from the heart of God to catch a handful of rainbows to decorate your face. great imagination and expression of love both human and divine.

this could be read in 2 ways.. like she has no joy and you are bringing it to her witht he rainbow and it makes you happy to see her happy.. but also read with the meaning that you would absolutely anything to make her life joyful.. no matter how hard the task.. like catching a rainbow.. you will do it.. very good poem.. amazing how it has so much meaning in such small writing.. well done :) x