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I Am Your Baby, Mum

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I am your baby Mum.
I did not come on my own Mum.
God's angels flew down to your womb
from the mighty heavens
and placed me in your holy womb.

I did not come on my own mum;
God wanted it so.

I was so happy in my new cave of love,

in your holy womb
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I Am Your Baby, Mum
Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: angels ,crime,evil,god,heaven,helplessness,innocence,love,mother and child
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After writing thisi cried bitterly.God forgive all those who do this. i wrote it at 12.30 midnight.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 19 November 2015

A strong composition, excellently presented. It's a memorable poem, respected Poet. Hat's off....

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Thabani Khumalo 26 November 2018

allow me a little moment to breath because this piece, in so many ways, have shaken my soul now and forever more. thank you for writing and thank you for making me read this one. i know it now, beyond any shadow of cast doubt, that writing legends are alive here on earth. i am Thabani Khumalo and this poem - this poem has given me goose-bums all over my body: # iam your baby mom.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 27 November 2018

my dear Thabani, thank u, thank u, thank u thousand times for your heartfelt comments. God bless you dear young poet. tony

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Heart touching concept and narration..Great Sir.. That made me translate it immediately..and posted in my page with a note of your version in the story portion..

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 December 2017

Dear poet. thank u for your comment....... i was looking for your translation.. did u post it here in your collection of poems. i would like to see that....... thank you very much. tony

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Ibtissam Ibrahim 23 July 2021

thanks for this great poem

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2021

A magnificient emotional poem.

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HB Rita 16 February 2021

Very Touchy love!

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Rosie Bourget 24 January 2021

Very emotional. I takes courage to write this piece.

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me poet yeps poet 23 December 2020

I THOUGHT THIS WAS YOUR BESTEST POEM NW C IN 2ND POSITION ALSO YOU MUST GRADE A POEM OR IT WILL BECOME STATIC POET DOC

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