Water Poem by Margaret Ann Newcomb

Water

Rating: 5.0


The water moves around you,
no space between it
and your skin.
As if it knows you.
As if it is trying to
get closer still.
Make me the water.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 08 July 2008

Passionate, , , , , , , seductive.....excellent composition!

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Craig Steiger 03 September 2007

I've always been amazed at how we can be dry under our skin when submerged.

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