Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 450,233 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Water Bubbles - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

May be mystery involved yet life is fully evolved,
We are to live here purposefully as resolved
We may express sorrow, pain and despair
But nature is there to welcome us with fresh air

How long we will go on blaming life impasse?
It has its own version and special class
Not all can enjoy it freely and purposefully
For it needs life angle to lead it successfully?

It can be taken as fun when everything is at feet
You can afford to mingle with people and greet
You are gifted with all sorts of luxury and treasure
Life is at ease and can be spent with pleasure

See the lie of starved people and dejected
They feel curse and all the time rejected
Their aim in life is not less than animals
Who carry on life aimlessly after arrivals?

Their aim is restricted to two square meals
They have nothing to hide or make deals
They are simply leading life for the sake of survival
No plan, no enthusiasm on their part for any revival

Everybody is aware of fact that life is like water bubble
With little slackness you can be in trouble
Life can be finished if you are not cautious
It must be prolonged and kept in motion or continuous

We are not sure of life after death
It is expressed in religious books as faith
Not much credence can be given without proof
And no one may listen to even if we shout on roof

So at the best we can make good use
Life as it is ours and we can choose
Where to go and how to spend?
Life is limited and may face any time its end


Comments about Water Bubbles by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/16/2011 7:55:00 PM)


    Cordell 2011.12.15 00: 56 Im not very good at writing thing for my mother. I get to tied up in it and dont do well. Good for you for doing this. Reply

    Our mothers are the ones who brought us into this world. Not only to grow up but to teach us lessons. Teach us things that will prevent a horrible future. They are our home and we should love them. Wednesday at 9: 17pm · Like

    Maya Dearth This fear is unreal and only exists in mind Some of the bare facts may appeal even to blind Rest your mind not on imaginary facts Start new life and don’t hastily act - such a wise and urging poem - great wisdom 11 minutes ago · Like

    Manju Suri ‎ Hasmukh Amathalal All children running helter- skelter...will ultimately find their shelter...in the loving arms of the mother...like her there could be none other...! ! ! about an hour ago · Like Kudos! to the marvelous write...! 8 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

    Padmini Devi yes my mom is the beauty of my eyes and mind...the courage to face hurdle taught to smile at the world even when the world is blames at me taught to laugh in agony taught love is my selfishness taught to love taught to protect my dependant taught to be a donor of love and affection Though i am not fully received what she taught......................... i know how to be a looser knowing all this 10 minutes ago · Like

    Kaniz Fatema I find whole of world in your eyes It has never occurred in mind to ask why? I tried to find some flaws in your movement But no where I could found the place to resent.............................Wonderful: -) 56 minutes ago · Unlike · 2
    DeleteSonu Sonal
    What a beautiful tribute to mother.. Marvelous write.

    Rafique Farooqi (12/14/2011 1: 42: 00 AM) beautiful work as always

    Sreedharan Parokode the very first 4 lines caught me..congrats.3 minutes ago · Like
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 16, 2011


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