Tuesday, June 30, 2015

Water Falling© Comments

Rating: 5.0

Water falling fast and flowing,
chasing down a monsoon stream;
Ever rushing, ever growing,
to catch a ray of stray sun beam!
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Roann Mendriq
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Beautiful! Reading this poem is like having the experience described in the concluding two lines. Thanks for sharing (10) .

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2015

Crystal clear! With the muse of water. Nice work.

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