Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Water Music For M Lady Chitra Comments

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I hear the music of the waterfall.
I am held fast entranced against my will.
It’s ceaseless flowing fluid melody
more potent than the fabled sirens call.
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Colin J... 24 June 2009

Beautiful poem, Ivor... 'I was held fast entranced against my will.' Colin J...

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Chitra - 24 June 2009

Dear Grandpa! fine imagery is layered within the architecture of this superb poem symbolising a surreal experience

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Patrick McFarland 24 June 2009

Another beautiful piece Ivor. I think we have all experienced being captured by a tune or a landscape or even a smell, but you manage to describe it in a way that only a superior poet can.

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