Kiersten Reilly

Rookie (August 5th 1989 / Toledo)

Water On Sand

Poem by Kiersten Reilly

I woke up and everything was different,
I had different friends,
That cared about me,
The music i listened to,
The shows on t.v.
My values before,
And my principles now,
All feel so different,
Had just changed somehow,
I just want to go back,
To this time last year,
You were with me,
Left me with no fear,
But its over now,
And i still hurt inside.
I've gotten over you,
That is for sure,
But i will alway love you,
I have yet to find my cure,
Six months i cried,
Wasted tears for you,
But you taught me so much,
For i had loved so few,
But there is one thing ill never understand,
How you came and went,
Just like water on sand.


Comments about Water On Sand by Kiersten Reilly

  • Melissa Barber (9/5/2005 12:35:00 AM)

    I love your poems... all of them! ! This poem reminded me of someone I loved too.(Report)Reply

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  • Seán O' Muiriosa (8/10/2005 5:02:00 PM)

    There is a lot of sadness in this poem, that is obvious, but I think you have greatly captured a feeling that we all feel in our lives at some stage. This is very good writing. Well done.
    Warm regards,
    Seán(Report)Reply

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  • Scott Clegg (8/10/2005 5:01:00 PM)

    excellent poem...great message and love the flow and tempo...(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 10, 2005