Saturday, November 14, 2015

Watermelon Taffy Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cooling fading sunset
Ribbons of pink, wisps,
swirls, pulled threads of taffy
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Raymond A Foss
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

changing to rose, to plum, fading to dust on the wind...Very wisely drafted and shared poem with wise inner meaning. Interesting...10

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Raymond A Foss

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