Watermelon Taffy Poem by Raymond A Foss

Watermelon Taffy

Rating: 5.0


The cooling fading sunset
Ribbons of pink, wisps,
swirls, pulled threads of taffy
darkening color
like watermelon taffy
changing to rose, to plum,
fading to dust on the wind
cooling into darkness,
while we sit on the lawn,
listening to the band,
waiting for the fireworks

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

changing to rose, to plum, fading to dust on the wind...Very wisely drafted and shared poem with wise inner meaning. Interesting...10

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Raymond A Foss

Raymond A Foss

Westfield, MA / United States
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