We Are One Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

We Are One

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It was not at all unreal
I had read feeling concealed
She was about to disclose
But instead not chosen

I gave her full marks
Not to start in haste
As she was clever enough
To make it worth for laugh

She was lovely flower
With all petals open after shower
She was as natural as rainbow
As if nature had allowed

She had all colors
With full pride and honor
She was powerful enough
To stand against any rough weather

I was singled out
But not left alone
She talked about
And simple thought about

She left message behind
It had future plan to mind
I went for in and messaged
It was thus ably managed

Now we are one and united
Our position is well stated
It stands good and exemplary
For any couple it is must and necessary

Wednesday, April 30, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

It was not at all unreal I had read feeling concealed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome shyla domnic 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

Rohani Daud Lovely poem 6 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

Kamar Niza nice lines 10 mins · Unlike · 1

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A nice, romantic and lovely poem! Thanks for sharing, Hasmukhji. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India May 1,2014 - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Dear Sir, You have woven magic in every stanza...just splendid! With kind regards, Shigufta Uzma, Rourkela May 01,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

Sherry Marino ino! ! ! 7 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

Mohan Lohani 'She had all colors' But who is she and where does she live? 26 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

Mitos Jane Tugade Nepomuceno always a great poet... 42 mins · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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