Friday, October 11, 2013

We Are Seeing Through The Red Comments

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O my evil pet, eating my Joy
Den: My patience’s decoy,
Only to mislead
I am searching Peace,
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David Wood 12 October 2013

Grief nibbles Hope cripples This is the scenario of life in some respects. We all have to be compasionate towards others less fortunate that ourselves.

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Valsa George 11 October 2013

Grief nibbles Hope cripples You have summarised the present scenario in these rhyming couplets! There is violence and spilling of blood everywhere crippling life and hope! ! Strongly put! !

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