Sunday, June 9, 2019

We Belong Comments

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You urge me to go, then beg me to stay,
Help me to know if I stand in your way.
Cruelly and constantly hurting me so bad,
Or am I the best man you've ever simply had?
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Shaun Cronick
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Chinedu Dike 12 June 2019

Deep passionate feelings nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with insight. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Shaun Cronick 13 June 2019

Chinedu, praise from you makes me uplifted.Thank you so much.Your poems are outstanding.

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