We'll Poem by Rafa Martin

We'll

Rating: 4.0


Naked of staff, rather laid off
like a wristwatch
I jump to the cockpit
without danger of scratch you
neither asking for anything impossible

I forgot to write down
the solemn departure lines

It's just one more flight
an excuse to look twice
in your Byzantine eyes
and not to be able nor know
how to say anything right nor superfluous

The propellers raise
There's enough air to take off

We'll
Friday, June 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: live
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 June 2017

wow propellers raise we all have ours on raise too wow poet lovely start give u

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 June 2017

A powerful and wonderful start. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 16 June 2017

Good rendition of words insightfully brought forth. A well drafted poem that leaves one with an enigma to ponder. Thanks for sharing Rafa.

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Unwritten Soul 16 June 2017

I think this write inspired during travelling maybe, I maybe wrong but it has sense of spontaneous to talk about stay and departure in life as well... Or maybe a simple goodbye? Good write :) welcome to poemhunter and share with us more work!

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Rafa Martin

Rafa Martin

Barcelona, Spain
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